Seat Onyx

And what do you think of my revision of this one?

Christmas on Fifth Avenue
(like a tree)

I dress myself in the city,
greys and blues
and blankets of white
over rainbow lights;
I wrap myself in a patterned crowd
of passing shapes,
and flakes
melting away on an onyx street.
I settle in the outside seat
of a bus
waiting for its train to fall [...]